I can sort of see it, or at least what you describe it as intended to be. The eyes in particular didn't work the way you intended, but knowing what to look for, they're recognizable.
Hmm, it looks a little like Spiritomb (#442) which is some ethereal fog looking swirl but it's missing face or two Swinubs (#220) with out of control fur hugging :P
I wouldn't call this a 'failure'. It's only a failure if it's illogical and this was totally logical. As others have said it was a very satisfying pace where I would just finish one set and another would become visible. Very enjoyable! I can sorta see the image I think - of a figure lying diagonal, disappearing into a swirling void.
Thank you all for your comments. I like to joke with any excuse, like a hanjie, but you do not need to look for anything (I really have no idea what the Invisible Man can look like in the Black Hole). I find it surprising that there are always pokemon that resemble anything (it must be a peculiar world); thanks PepperMint. Jecfinn, if I get someone to enjoy a little, or just smile, I'm satisfied; thanks for letting me know.