You can't just throw arbitrary dots into the grid and call it a hanjie. It has to actually be solvable using logic. It shouldn't require any guessing based on the form of the puzzle.
When you have created your puzzle the first step is to actually press try. Then try to solve your puzzle using logic not guessing based on things you know. It has taken me an hour to tweek a puzzle to make it fully logical. Just by putting in a blank row after the first word would have helped.
Nothing against you, but this one is as illogical as the first one.
That is why creating a puzzle can take a long time: just writing or drawing something is easy. Testing it to see if it is solvable without any guesswork and then tweaking it is timeconsuming, and creating a picture that manages to be beautiful at the same time can be tricky and is really noteworthy.